Friday, January 15, 2010

Wow was that poem below hard to write. Took so much thinking and it doesn't seem as perfect as I wanted it. The message is still there but I could use devices more strategically to make it much more artistic. But from all the thinking I just did for this I think I'll edit it later. Haha anyone have an opinion as to how I could incorporate devices more strategically with regards to the message I'm trying to convey? Thanks

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