I was so inspired today because I read the awesomest poem on the bus. I am really start to love the idea of "Poetry in Motion" on transit, it really has some great and meaningful poems. Everytime I read one I just get amazed at how the imagery, and today TASTE of AIR, was conveyed. It just draws you in so nicely. Reading those make me wonder if I could EVER write poetry like that. Seriously, mine are just a bunch of rhymes talking about a transition from beginning to end. To me it conveys a message but not sure if it does the same for others. The way authors of Poetry in Motion convey their poems through coordinated free-verse is just so intense. I'm going to try really hard to write an intense, breathtaking, poem like that for my next poem (which I hope I get enough spare time to write soon).
The poem I saw on the transit described the breathtaking air of nature on the Himalayas and drifting snow, and compared it the breath of a girl or a woman, which just frickin' inspired me because it was a dayum awesome love poem. Like c'mon, comparing a woman or a girl's breath to be better than natural air, calling her divine through defying nature, is just the best love poem I've read since a long time. If only I could... hmmm...
Tuesday, October 20, 2009
Poetry in Motion...
Posted by Saphoetic at 11:06 PM
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